Aleena de Lys

[Aleena]

Aleena de Lys

Basics

Name;; Aleena de Lys
Age;; 15
Gender;; Female
Species;; Human

Appearance

Hair;; Curly red, goes halfway down her back, usually up in a braid.
Eyes;; It's not easy to decide: somewhere between green and blue.
Skin;; Fair
Height;; Somewhat shorter then average
Weight;; Light
Build;; Slim
Extra;;

For the first sight she's an ordinary girl. She normally wears comfortalble clothes, leather boots, and a dark cape. The outfit has some hidden pockets, where she keep her knife, and things like that.

Internal

Personality;;

Her parents died, when she was young, so a friend of the family adopted her. When she became 14, Aleena left home. She wanted to start a new life without any adults who tell her all the time what to do.
She is curious, but not too indiscreet, and considerably silent. She forgive easily, but never forget. Aleena wants to be a warrior, if it's possible, but at the moment, got only a knife. She makes friends easily, but she isn't too credulous.

The Puppeteer

Ooc Name;; Estelwen is fine.
Other Accounts;; None, as of yet
Something Interesting About You;; I'm a beginner role player.
How You Got Here;;

A friend of mine showed me this site.

[-Brinzer-]

First off, welcome to EoD! We love new members. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

Now, this application is pending.
We would like to see more than that for a personality, but we understand how difficult applications can be for beginner roleplayers, so I would be happy to give you advice on how to lengthen it. c:
But other than that, she looks good! I think she has the potential to be a great character if you fill out her personality a little more.

[Aleena]

First, thanks for your tolerance and compassion and sorry for the leeway! I don't know exactly, what are the things it have to contain, but I try to characterize her again:
Aleena is a little bit precocious, but still too young to live on her own. She is sensible and serious, and considerably silent. She isn't shy, and doesn't afraid of people - just doesn't like to speak; prefer listening.
Aleena wants to be self-supporting, but she has no idea, how to start it. She has some dim ideas about life, but it's not too much, so her aim is to be a warrior (she has a little bit unreal conception of it...) If anyone insults her, she hard gets hairy, but in comptent of her age, can protect herself.
But to tell you the truth, Aleena needa mentor, or somebody, who take care of her.
I think that's all. Is anything more you are curious for?

[-Brinzer-]

Hm. Well in light of you being a beginner, that should be good enough for now, since you seem to have a good idea of it, and just cant explain it in depth. But don't worry; it takes some time to get the hang of it. c:

So this character is

ACCEPTED.

Have fun on the site! c: And don't hesitate to ask if you have any questions about the boards or procedures. You can PM me here.